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pmmsnyahooaim | | Re: Blazing Arrow (1st Jan 08 at 7:02pm UTC) | | kinda filter pile-ish, but it still looks great  | |
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pm | | Re: Blazing Arrow (1st Jan 08 at 7:11pm UTC) | | | fitst one the bottom left eww! Contrast alert! tone that down a lot. I personally like the second simply cause it has a bg, which could be improved? It also takes away the focal point of the render. | |
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pmmsn | | Re: Blazing Arrow (1st Jan 08 at 7:20pm UTC) | | fitst one the bottom left eww! Contrast alert! tone that down a lot. I personally like the second simply cause it has a bg, which could be improved? It also takes away the focal point of the render.
1st one was just showing you the process.  And 2nd one is the real one. I might tone down the bg a bit.
By the way Xero... there's no filters. oO;;; | |
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pmmsnxfire | | Re: Blazing Arrow (1st Jan 08 at 7:28pm UTC) | | Text needs some serious help. :/
Smudging is pretty good though. I'd just like to see the effects bring flow towards the focal, though. | |
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pmmsnxfire | | Re: Blazing Arrow (2nd Jan 08 at 5:10am UTC) | | Looks awesome  , I think the left side of the smudged render could be blended better | |
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pmwwwmsngtalk | | Re: Blazing Arrow (3rd Jan 08 at 12:30am UTC) | | Its not that bad, but it could use work.
By showing the process it already tells me what I thought; you put together the effects on the guy and then placed it on/over the castle. It would of been better if you had the castle already there and worked it together so it looked like he was part of it all.
The text in the one labeled 2 is a good positioning, it keeps it balanced. The font for the B in blazing looks awkward compared to the A. I don't really like the font used for 'Defender the Castle,' something more like the font used for 'Blazing Arrow' would be better.
The effects done are nice, but its hard to tell its supposed to be a blazing arrow without the name. It looks simply like a smudged arrow. Its a bit hard to see the arrow in my opinion, and it should be more clear. Just paste the render/stock over it and erase everything but the arrow.
Other than that its pretty nice. I prefer #2 over #3. | |
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