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First only smudge sig - Posted By Virtualize (virtualize) on 31st Dec 07 at 7:13pm
Image

Or maybe not as much going on:

Image

Black and white:
http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd48/virtualize/smudgegrey.png
or
http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd48/virtualize/smudgegrey1.png
Re: First only smudge sig - Posted By Michael (wrighty) on 31st Dec 07 at 7:21pm
I like it... the 2nd one is beter I think... Without all of the crazyness! {Tongue Out}

Colour FTW!
Re: First only smudge sig - Posted By Virtualize (virtualize) on 31st Dec 07 at 7:23pm
Posted By Michael on 31st Dec 07 at 7:21pm
 
I like it... the 2nd one is beter I think... Without all of the crazyness! {Tongue Out}

Colour FTW!


{Grin} Thankies! {Tongue Out}
Re: First only smudge sig - Posted By Parker (parker) on 31st Dec 07 at 7:30pm
1st is muchos better. The colouring is great and smudging is great as well. You have created a great focal point and the sharpening is in the right places. The text is good tbh doesnt take away focal point and still looks great {Cheesy} I would add flow to it to make it look great {Cheesy}
Re: First only smudge sig - Posted By Virtualize (virtualize) on 31st Dec 07 at 7:33pm
Posted By Parker on 31st Dec 07 at 7:30pm
 
1st is muchos better. The colouring is great and smudging is great as well. You have created a great focal point and the sharpening is in the right places. The text is good tbh doesnt take away focal point and still looks great {Cheesy} I would add flow to it to make it look great {Cheesy}


Thanks, yea I'll need to work on the flow. {Tongue Out}
Re: First only smudge sig - Posted By Parker (parker) on 31st Dec 07 at 7:38pm
Its still great. maybe add some c4ds in there to have some flow and concept {Cheesy}
Re: First only smudge sig - Posted By Virtualize (virtualize) on 31st Dec 07 at 7:39pm
Posted By Parker on 31st Dec 07 at 7:38pm
 
Its still great. maybe add some c4ds in there to have some flow and concept {Cheesy}


=P I'll properly do that. But alllll my other tags have c4ds so I tried doing something different. {Grin}
Re: First only smudge sig - Posted By Kronus (kronus) on 31st Dec 07 at 8:26pm
Very nice composition. Text could be built upon, but doesn't really bring the image down much. Version 1 of the color variety is the best. Second has that negative space that doesn't flow well.
Re: First only smudge sig - Posted By Virtualize (virtualize) on 31st Dec 07 at 8:32pm
Posted By Kronus on 31st Dec 07 at 8:26pm
 
Very nice composition. Text could be built upon, but doesn't really bring the image down much. Version 1 of the color variety is the best. Second has that negative space that doesn't flow well.


Thanks.
I'll properly work more on the first one then. {Tongue Out}
Re: First only smudge sig - Posted By Kronus (kronus) on 31st Dec 07 at 9:02pm
Can't wait to see it. ^^